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Postby karma » Sun May 27, 2007 2:39 am

denizaksulu wrote:Yes Karma, when Iread Orhan Veli Kanik for the first time I also laughed. Serbest siirle aram iyi degildir. I do not like modern poetry. But one always sticks to my mind. I like old folk poetry and divan siiri. I read them in Osmanli (eski harflerle)
If I remember correctly it was called the "Cimbizli siir"

Bir taraftan atom bombasi
Bir taraftan Londra konferansi
Bir elinde cimbiz
Bir elinde ayna
Umurunda mi dunya.

Translation:

On one hand you have the atomic bomb
On the other the London Conferance
In one hand she holds tweezers
In the other a mirror
Does she have a care, of the world?

Iyi geceler, tatli ruyalar


it is my fav. coz it is dedicated to me..lolll ...Fahriye Abla :wink:
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Postby karma » Sun May 27, 2007 2:41 am

denizaksulu wrote:Yes Karma, when Iread Orhan Veli Kanik for the first time I also laughed. Serbest siirle aram iyi degildir. I do not like modern poetry. But one always sticks to my mind. I like old folk poetry and divan siiri. I read them in Osmanli (eski harflerle)
If I remember correctly it was called the "Cimbizli siir"

Bir taraftan atom bombasi
Bir taraftan Londra konferansi
Bir elinde cimbiz
Bir elinde ayna
Umurunda mi dunya.

Translation:

On one hand you have the atomic bomb
On the other the London Conferance
In one hand she holds tweezers
In the other a mirror
Does she have a care, of the world?

Iyi geceler, tatli ruyalar


correcting

Ne atom bombasi,
Ne Londra konferansi....
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Postby zan » Sun May 27, 2007 2:58 am

This is my translation, with poetic licence of:

Penceremin perdesini
Havalandıran rüzgar
Denizleri köpük köpük
Dalgalandıran rüzgar
Gir içeri usul usul
Beni bu dertten kurtar
Yabancısın buralara
Nerelerden geliyorsun
Otur dinlen başucuma
Belli ki çok yorulmuşsun
Bana esmeyi anlat
Bana sevmeyi anlat
Bana esmeyi anlat
Esip geçmeyi anlat
Anlat ki çözülsün dilim
Ben rüzgarım demeliyim
Rüzgarlığı anlat bana
Senin gibi esmeliyim







The wind that makes my curtains flap

That makes the seas to froth and lap

Enter with your usual manner

And save me from my suffering


You’re a stranger to these places

Tell me from where you do hail

Sit and rest a while above me

For your tiredness is there to tell



Explain to me how breezes blow

Explain to me what love does know

Explain to me how winds do flow


Explain to me so I speak freely

So I can say I am the wind

Explain to me your windful secrets

So I can flow along like you.
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Postby LENA » Sun May 27, 2007 3:02 am

That was amazing Zan...thanks!
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Postby BirKibrisli » Sun May 27, 2007 8:27 am

karma wrote:
Birkibrisli wrote:
karma wrote:
Birkibrisli wrote:One of my favourite songs from that group,Zan...
I love the duet at the end...Everyone should listen... 8)


I like them too but last few weeks I have been listening only Acilarin Kadini-Bergen :cry: and sometimes Muslum :cry:


Muslum Gurses...REally???I never took that guy seriously...Which songs do you like by him,karma???


LOL, I was kidding...
Can u imagine Muslum after having listened to Edith Piaf :lol:


Phew....I was worried about your taste for a minute,karma dear...
Edith Piaf...is a Godess....I learnt French just to listen to her songs... 8)
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Postby denizaksulu » Sun May 27, 2007 2:13 pm

I think Karma is following TASSAVUF (Karma please translate) I think her belief is that of "When one meets their end (dies)one is in unison with their beloved one".
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Postby denizaksulu » Sun May 27, 2007 2:20 pm

Zan that was excellent. I know I rushed my translation. Even then I could not have managed as beautiful as your. Are you a poet as well?
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Postby zan » Sun May 27, 2007 3:39 pm

denizaksulu wrote:Zan that was excellent. I know I rushed my translation. Even then I could not have managed as beautiful as your. Are you a poet as well?



Thanks mate. I do like to write a bit and although I have never really liked poetry I think over the last couple of years I have become a convert. I too rushed that translation late last night and missed a line so here is the new version:


The wind that makes my curtains flap

That makes the seas to froth and lap

Enter with your usual manner

And save me from my suffering


You’re a stranger to these places

Tell me from where you do hail

Sit and rest a while above me

For your tiredness is there to tell



Explain to me how breezes blow

Explain to me what love does know

Explain to me how winds do flow

Explain how you can blow then go


Explain to me so I speak freely

So I can say I am the wind

Explain to me your windful secrets

So I can flow along like you.
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Postby denizaksulu » Sun May 27, 2007 4:25 pm

Zan; You sound like an English Language graduate. Very good. A good command of the English language is evident. Do you have any weaknesses? Please dont tell me, they might jump on it.
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Postby LENA » Sun May 27, 2007 4:29 pm

denizaksulu wrote:Zan; You sound like an English Language graduate. Very good. A good command of the English language is evident. Do you have any weaknesses? Please dont tell me, they might jump on it.


He is moody... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Sorry I couldnt hold my self on that! :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
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